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Mist th, September 14th, 2009, 2:22 am ( Reply )

- It's complete now.

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Some Poses look a little strange.
As in the clothing. Where a little dint should be for the underarm is just baggyness.
Baggyness is ok but It needs to be avoises in some places..
Also you have no proper light source.
Try to shade to one light source as oppsed to shading in the middle as that is called Pillow Shading if I am correct~
Im no expert, though..

posted by Remmis! on September 14th, 2009, 4:42 am



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i joins please?

posted by Sparky The Fox on September 16th, 2009, 1:31 am





 
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If you get better at making comics then this, sure.

http://waveshotel.smackjeeves.com/comics/696581/sparkys-intro-and-hopefully-and-end-of-a -plot/

posted by godmoderncommander on September 17th, 2009, 10:18 am





 
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Woah. You might want to get a little more experience in before you join. I'm sorry, but you're obviously new and people are going to criticize you if you don't practice.

Anyway, I feel like I've been lagging behind in this comic, so I'll try to update tomorrow or saturday.

posted by Ancientminister on September 17th, 2009, 9:47 pm



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